Another Revision

 

This is my second time to get feedback but my first time to receive feedback from my fellow class mates. I also had to take part in this task and I must say I found it a very beneficial experience. 

I received three comments in my blog posts which I read carefully and tried to thick off all concerns they had. It was great to get views from a variety of people, not too many comments but enough to motivate you to put time and effort into ones work. I believe if one is filled with too many comments it can be more confusing and challenging than ever because you'll try to make everyone happy.

From this experience, I have learned many things about my own work but have also learned from others. When reading others opinions its great to get your mind working and I felt myself starting to ask questions. People word things differently and I thought when reading a fellow classmates blog they taught me many things without even realising. My own work has come on in leaps and bounds as I can feel these blogposts becoming more enjoyable than challenging.

I believe both rewrites and receiving feedback should be looked at in a positive way, they have helped me to grow and learn. Speaking to some of my classmates they have agreed with this. Many people struggle with writing and especially reading. When it comes to page article many people will lose interest, there is zero motivation to this however when feedback is being given it made the task more fun in a challenging sense. Overall, I have no complaints and look forward to continuing them throughout the year.